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Post by Brighteyes on Feb 3, 2007 13:44:53 GMT -5
Name: Brighteyes
Rank:Queen
Clan:LedgeClan
Gender: She-Cat
Age: 23 moons
Picture (Optional):
Physical Description: She is a light grey cat. She also has long whiskers that are white. She has bright green eyes
Personality: Brighteyes has a very unusual personality. She is nice to kits and other queens but she is mean to warriors. She also can get nice to everyone if they listin to what she says.
History: Brightheart was a born a LedgeClan cat. Her mother died giving birth to her. She got atacked by a hawk once and killed it for fresh-kill.
IC: "Get away from here" Brighteyes snapped at a tom. "Brighteyes calm down I am her just to see my kits" said the tom. "Well just make it quick!" she hissed...
Code Word: Shadowed Light
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Post by Willowstar on Feb 5, 2007 21:25:36 GMT -5
I'd accept this, but unfortunately, I cannot. Snakestar will most likely be on soon to accept it.
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Post by . Mµ†è [kï±±ý] on Feb 20, 2007 15:14:06 GMT -5
It needs more personality, physical, and history, and maybe a little more IC.
If Snake doesn't approve it, it's fine Willow. You accept your own Clan's bios, don't you?
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Post by Snakestar on Feb 20, 2007 15:25:55 GMT -5
This bio needs a lot more history and IC before it can be accepted.
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Post by . Mµ†è [kï±±ý] on Feb 21, 2007 17:47:46 GMT -5
As I said..
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Post by Willowstar on Mar 1, 2007 21:36:27 GMT -5
It's true, I accept my own clan's bios.
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Post by Snakestar on Mar 7, 2007 14:48:21 GMT -5
Accepted.
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